I feel like this one is almost there. A nice frame, but it needs some element of mystery. Perhaps if someone walked by and you yelled out, "hey you". and then they looked at you. I really am serious about the first part. I am drawn to the picture, but there isn't anything to keep me there after that. Real eloquent I know.
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I like this shot, Eddie. Keep looking for these moments and the content will come.
I sound like field of dreams, "If you build it, they will come..."
I feel like this one is almost there. A nice frame, but it needs some element of mystery. Perhaps if someone walked by and you yelled out, "hey you". and then they looked at you. I really am serious about the first part. I am drawn to the picture, but there isn't anything to keep me there after that. Real eloquent I know.
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